What is your intention? What "grabs" you most about the scene?
Do you have variety in your line? Variety in your shape, scale, and proportion?
How are you going to add more character to lines?
Add the dark mass.
Try in different formats (horizontal, square, upright, etc.).
Post your new "rediscovered" 10 line drawings of this winter scene in the Community Space under Zoom Sessions---> 1.18.22 Rediscovering 10 Lines section.